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A Girl.

Post by Randomstezzy on Wed Mar 19, 2008 10:57 am

Title: I'm right now thinkig of one! ahh, um . how about "A girl" yeah.
Author: Steph/Randomstezzy
Styanzas: One .
Dedications: The people reading this , the audience
A/N: Umm , It's a poem experienced ..




There's a girl , searching for a friend ,
There's a girl in a frame , within a shell broken into pieces ,
Most people don't understand how she feels ,
Being driven into struggle and little hope ,
She just wished things were better ,
She needs deliverance , some appreciation ,
There's a girl , searching for a friend who gives her these
She's just thankful , she has the hope to keep going
the hardwork to be were she would like to be.


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Re: A Girl.

Post by Critical Acclaim on Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:00 am

pretty cool stez, well done.

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Re: A Girl.

Post by xlyndseyx on Thu Mar 20, 2008 3:00 am

thats really good Smile

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Re: A Girl.

Post by xcutexangelx on Thu Mar 20, 2008 4:43 am

Cool.. Smile

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Re: A Girl.

Post by Randomstezzy on Thu Mar 20, 2008 6:59 am

Thanks for the comments!!!! Smile
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