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Crying Tears of Blood

Post by psychobabe on Fri Mar 07, 2008 5:15 am

Crying Tears Of Blood

I stare across the room at him
Eyes focusing on his neck
On the pale slightly tanned skin
I can almost hear his heart beating
Pumping every precious drop of blood
Flowing through every vein.

I can see it, picture it
My teeth, sinking, deep
Deep into the flesh of his neck
Bursting every vessel
Blood spurting over my tongue
The brilliant, cold, metallic taste
Filling my mouth with pleasure.

Then I snap back
Into harsh reality
Hard stool beneath me
Pen in hand
Just another lesson
Just another day
I begin to cry, tears of blood
Staining the cold, white paper
And my cold, white soul.

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Post by xcutexangelx on Fri Mar 07, 2008 5:27 am

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Fri Mar 07, 2008 9:12 am

Awww kinda sad ending.
Loved it.

Well done Razz

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Post by psychobabe on Sun Mar 09, 2008 8:54 am

thanks Very Happy

one of my mates said it was disturbing Neutral lols

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Post by xcutexangelx on Sun Mar 09, 2008 12:05 pm

Naah..
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