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Post by xcutexangelx on Thu Feb 21, 2008 4:18 am

Title: Great minds think alike
Author: Joyce, i wrote this a long time ago with Sarah
Chapters: no chapters,, but we took turns to write parts

Rating: 16+
Disclaimer: I own the whole fic,, haha
Dedications: For all my fans readers
A/N: Sex and surprising turns
Summary:
About a cruise that had gone out of hand

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Post by xcutexangelx on Thu Feb 21, 2008 4:20 am

Great minds think a like..



Joined fic with Joyce and Sarah..
We both will write in our own style..
Hope that you guys won’t get all confused by it..
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Sarah and i were friends since elementairy school.. We decided to go on a cruise together.. We chose to go to Miami.. Sarah and i both went to the deck as soon the boat left the dock.. We decided to go sunbathing.. We got in our sexiest bikini’s,, grabbed a good chair and ordered a drink.. I easely get bored if i’m lying in the sun,, so i chose to check out the guys.. I noticed 2 cute guys..

Joyce: Ehm Sarah..??
Sarah: Yeah..??
Joyce: Do we need help with the sunblock..??
Sarah: Why..??
Joyce: Look..
She took a peek from under her sunglasses and laughed..
Sarah: Oh yes please..
I signed the guys to come over when i nocited that they were looking at us.. The guys looked at eachother and smiled before they walked towards us..

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Post by xcutexangelx on Thu Feb 21, 2008 4:50 am

The guys walked towards us with huge grins on their faces.
“Hello girls” one of the guys said.
“Hello there, would you guys mind helping us with the sun lotion?” Joyce said with a smirk.
We exchanged looks and smiled, and then rolled over on our stomach and let the guys rub sun lotion on our backs.
“Uhm, I’ll need to remove your top if you want me rub it in properly” The guy rubbing my back said.
I looked over at Joyce and she just smiled.
“Okay” I said and he opened my top and I removed it.
The guys didn’t say anything but I can guess what was running through their minds. The other guy convinced Joyce to take off her top as well, and after a couple of minutes they were done with rubbing our back in to sun lotion.
“Do you girls need help with anything else?” The dirty-blonde haired guy said.
“Uhm?” I said looking over at Joyce; we were both lying on our stomachs, giggling.
“Well, you could keep us entertained” Joyce said looking at me.
We both put on our tops and sat op.
“So what’s your names” Joyce said.
“I’m Dougie” The guy with the dirty-blonde hair said.
“And I’m Danny” the guy with the brown curls said.
“Well, hello there” I said winking at Danny.
“I’m Sarah” I said
“And I’m Joyce” Joyce said. We looked at each other giggling. We were both thinking the same thing, but I don’t think the guys had a clue.
“So what did you girls had in mind” Dougie said sitting down next to Joyce, staring at her breasts.
“Oh I don’t know, what do you think Joyce” I said looking at her.
“We could go to the bar and get something to drink” Joyce said shrugging, but I knew what was going through her mind.
“Okay” I said and got on my feet. I linked my arm with Danny and Joyce did the same with Dougie’s. This was going to be an awesome cruise.

We got to the bar and ordered drinks. We spend a few hours talking about ourselves, which was quite amusing, but my mind was set on something else.
I exchanged looks with Joyce without the boys noticing.
“We should probably go and get ready for dinner” I said looking at Joyce.
“Yeah we should” Joyce said smiling.
“Aw do you really have to” Dougie said grabbing Joyce’s arm.
“Sorry lads” I said smiling and got off the bar stool.
“We could meet up at dinner?” Joyce said looking at me, like it was just some random idea that popped in to her head.
“Oh yeah we could do that” Danny said smiling from ear to ear.
We agreed to meet for dinner and me and Joyce went to our rooms and got ready. We had deliberately chosen to have our own room.
The dinner was held in the big dinner room, with all the guests. But of course, we hadn’t have time for any of the other guests, we were too busy to look after hotties. And we did succeed.

We both got ready for dinner and met up in Joyce’s room. I had put on a short white summer dress, and Joyce had put on a pair of knee short black pants and a black tank top, with a nice blue and black striped tie.
“Oh hello sexy” I said laughing.
“You should talk” she said eyeing me up.
“What do you mean?” I said innocently.
“You so wanna shag him” She laughed putting on some eyeliner.
“Are you ready” I said avoiding answering her question.
“Yeah let’s go” She said taking a last look in the mirror.
We walked to the dining room, and saw the guys. They were waiting for us, looking pretty nervous.
“Hi” I said smiling.
Both guys eyed us up and then exchanged looks.
We walked over to a table and sat down. We talked for a bit until the food arrived. Of course this was a luxurious cruise, so we had waiters serving our food.
We ate dinner, and talked about random stuff. Things were getting boring so I looked over at Joyce and she nodded. We both started running over feet against the boys legs. They both stared at each other, but Joyce and I pretended like nothing was going on.
When we had finished eating we decided to go up to the deck.

We looked out at the sea, the sun was setting and the sea was red. I was staring at the sea, thinking about how this cruise was going to end up. Knowing Joyce, it was going to be a lot of fun. We were heading for Miami, and we needed adventure and a break from our normal everyday lives.

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Thu Feb 21, 2008 9:19 am

hehe i like this one.

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Post by xcutexangelx on Thu Feb 21, 2008 9:52 am

Me too and this site will see the end the first..

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Thu Feb 21, 2008 9:55 am

yay The sites privaledged. [sp..?]

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Post by xcutexangelx on Thu Feb 21, 2008 10:07 am

Maybe if unofficial people wanna read it they i guess that they have to add this site.. Wink

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Thu Feb 21, 2008 10:11 am

hehe true

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Post by xcutexangelx on Thu Feb 21, 2008 10:18 am

Maybe you can let them know in my fic things,, couse that site is still crappy towards me.. Sad

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Thu Feb 21, 2008 10:37 am

have you tried using the password 'password'...?

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Post by xcutexangelx on Thu Feb 21, 2008 10:56 am

No i ment like it just stops showing pages after a while..

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Thu Feb 21, 2008 11:03 am

that's stupid.

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Post by xcutexangelx on Thu Feb 21, 2008 11:09 am

I know..
It sucks..

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Thu Feb 21, 2008 11:13 am

Are you continuing Webcam Girls on here aswell...?

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i like this one, its good

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Post by xcutexangelx on Thu Mar 13, 2008 3:55 pm

The guys were talking to eachother.. I walked up to the railing and looked in the colourful sky.. I just knew that this vacation was gonna be great.. Even if i had to take care of it.. I looked over to the guys.. They looked up from their conversation.. The guys smiled at eachother.. Dougie walked over to me and Danny to Sarah.. She was standing not far from me,, in her own dreamworld.. Dougie grabbed me around my waist..

Dougie: The sunset is beautiful isn’t it..??

Joyce: Yeah..

He began to whisper in my ear..

Dougie: What was the thing at dinner all about..??

I acted like i didn’t knew what he was talking about..

Joyce: What thing.. We just talked,, didn’t we..??

He opened his mouth to say something,, but changed his mind.. He rested his chin om my shoulder..

Dougie: You look sexy this evening..

Joyce: Thanks..

I leaned with my arms on the railing,, which made me bend a bit.. Dougie lifted his head up,, but still had his hands around my waist.. I moved my ass back and forth to shake myself loose from his grip..

Dougie: Woah.. Stop it.. Your getting me excited here..

Joyce: Can you please stand next to me..?? I have the feeling that we are getting funny looks..

He let go off me and leaned on the railing too.. I looked over Dougies shoulder towards Danny and Sarah.. I could hear them too.. Danny was standing really close to her playing with her fingers.. Her hands were holding the railing and she looked out at the sun set.. She looked like she wasnt sure what he was trying to do,, but she pulled her hands away..

Danny: Sorry

I noticed that she tried to look offended,, but i knew she wasn’t..

He was very easy to tease, couse he wasnt that good at realizing it was just a joke.

Danny: So..

He tried to start a conversation,, but she just ignored him..

I wasn’t sure if she was pretending or not.. He looked very confused..

Danny:Am I bothering you..??

Sarah: Yes you are..

She sounded pretty harsh and as he turned around to walk away she ran after him and pushed him in the pool,, to everyones amusement but his own..

Dougie: Why are you so quiet..??

Joyce: Sssh.. I’m trying to follow what is happening between Sarah and Danny..

I pointed towards the pool.. Dougie looked now too..

Danny: I'll get you for this..!!

He was splashing around in the pool.. Sarah was standing close to the edge,, laughing.. Dougie and i were laughing too.. Suddenly Danny splashed water on her, which wasnt a good combination with her white dress.. It became completely transparent and we saw that she wasnt wearing any bra..

Sarah: DANNY..!!

Danny: Oh that was much better..

He laughed,, getting out of the pool.. Dougie and i were whistling at her to tease her.. She marched off in anger.. I followed her.. Unfortunately for her the dining room was still full..

Sarah: ARGH,, Danny give me your wet shirt..!!

Danny: Okay..

He was unbuttoning his shirt.. He wasnt that bad looking and Sarah looked pretty much inpressed..

Sarah: Oh..

She took his shirt,, while she looked over to me with a smile.. I giggled and she wrapped the wet shirt around her.. Danny needed to change too so they both walked back to their rooms, to change in to some dry clothes.. Dougie and i had followed them and were talking about meeting eachother again..

Dougie: We’ll better go and talk to them..

Joyce: Shall we meet up somewhere when we are done here..??

Dougie: Sure.. What about at the bar..??

Sarah went into her room and changed.

Joyce: sounds fine by me..

I came in to Sarah’s room.. I was smiling from ear to ear..

Sarah: He's gorgeous isnt he..??

She tried to get out off her wet dress..

Joyce: Yeah I guess he is,, but you so deserved getting splashed with water..

I laughed and sat down on her bed.

Sarah: What..??

She looked in shock while she said that and tried to look innocent..

Joyce: You pushed the poor guy in the pool after giving him the cold shoulder..

Sarah: So what..??

She laughed and got a towel so she could dry off.. She changed into something more comfortable and we left to go to the bar,, where i had promised Dougie we would meet them..

Sarah: So what are we doing with these guys..??

Joyce: Well,, i’m trying to keep myself entertained for how long this cruise will take.. You know,, teasing and all..

Sarah: And all..?? Are you planning on more for tonight..??

Joyce: I don’t know yet.. We’ll see about that in a while..

She laughed.. Dougie bought me a drink..

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Post by xcutexangelx on Thu Mar 13, 2008 3:55 pm

Glad you like it.. Wink

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Thu Mar 13, 2008 5:29 pm

You get more that's for sure :p

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Post by xcutexangelx on Fri Mar 14, 2008 7:58 am

LMAO..
Ssh..!!

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Fri Mar 14, 2008 10:47 am

*zips mouth up*

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Post by xcutexangelx on Sun Mar 16, 2008 1:35 pm

The cruise took a few days, and when we arrived in Miami we were staying there for a few days. I didn’t know if we were just having fun with the boys or if we were going to spend the entire cruise with them?

It was getting late, and we were all sat in the bar.
“So what do you guys do for a living” I asked taking a sip of my drink.
“Uhm, we’re musicians” Danny said.
“Broke ass wannabe’s or are you in a real band” I said coldly, giving him a sceptic look.
He laughed and looked over at Dougie.
“We’re in a band called McFLY and we’re pretty big in the UK” he said proudly.
“I’ve never heard of you, which means you’re not big enough” I said quietly, to show him I wasn’t impressed. We weren’t the only people in the bar. A girl our age were sitting close to us by a table all by herself. She was staring at us the entire time.
“I think you’ve got yourself a new fan club” I mumbled looking at Danny.
The others turned around and looked at the poor girl who quickly left the bar.
“Aw it looks like she wasn’t a fan after all” I mocked and finished my drink.
“Hah hah” Danny said sarcastically.
“Sorry guys im off to bed” I said and got up.
“Are you coming Joyce?” I asked.
“Uhm, no I think I’ll stay a bit longer” She said winking at me.
“Okay, see you tomorrow then” I said and left the bar. I followed the railing and walked around the dining room, taking the back entrance.
I suddenly stopped becos I heard footsteps behind me, I turned around and was kind of disappointed when I saw it was an old man. I walked back to my room and went to bed, but I couldn’t fall asleep.

An hour later I heard Joyce return with the lads. I slowly opened the door and peeped through it to see it the lads were gone.
“Psst, Joyce” I whispered.
“I thought you went to bed” Danny’s face suddenly appeared. He looked so cute when he smiled.
“Shit” I screamed in shock and jumped back. He pushed the door open and came in to my room. He didn’t say anything; he just sat down on my bed and eyed me up. I was wearing silk hot pants and a t-shirt, and suddenly felt naked.
“So, you play hard to get” He said smirking.
“This is a cruise; did you think it would be loaded with horny girls?” I said and rummaged through my trunk to find a pair of sweatpants, but of course I hadn’t brought any cos that’s not what you wear on a cruise to Miami.

Joyce walked in and gave us a weird look.
“What did you want” She said looking at Danny and then at me.
“Oh nothing, but would you please take him with you on your way out” I said.
“No” She laughed and left, closing the door behind her.
Danny looked up at me as if he was expecting me to do something.
“Shoo” I said which made me laugh, cos he wasn’t a cat.
“What was that” He laughed, which made my knees melt. Argh I hated it when guy were so adorable!
“Danny I need sleep” I said desperately.
“Go out on the deck and play or something”
“I’ll leave but you’re not getting rid of me that easy” He smirked and left my room.
I had to cover my mouth to avoid screaming, he made me mad as hell and all excited at the same time.
Who was this Danny from a band called McFLY? Who ever he was I had to kno, and luckily I had brought my laptop, so I spend half the night reading stuff on the internet about him, and his band.

The next morning I met up with Joyce, and went to breakfast. Luckily the boys were nowhere to be seen, so it gave us time to gossip about them. I told Joyce everything I had read and we had a great time talking about them. After breakfast we went up on the deck, to swim in the pool. There were loads of people up there, but we managed to find a spot that wasn’t too crowded. We put our things down and jumped in the massive pool. We had a water fight and chatted about what we were going to do when we got to Miami.

Suddenly someone shouted and the next thing I new was Danny’s huge smile in front of me.
“Oh hi” I said looking disappointed. Joyce was being splashed with water by Dougie, and she was fighting to keep him away. Suddenly he grabbed her and pulled her under.
“Well hello to you too” Danny said.
I swam over to the edge of the pool and pulled myself up. I walked over to our things and laid down, putting on my sunglasses. The sun was shining and it was hot even tho we were sailing on the open sea.
Danny walked over to me and lay down next to me. It was kinda cute that he was trying so hard. I then decided to be a little nicer to him, but it was weird, seeing as I just met him yesterday and really didn’t know him.

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I kept trying to escape from Dougie,, but then he pushed me in the corner off the pool..
Dougie: There’s nowhere you can go now..
Joyce: Ok,, what do i have to do for you to leave me alone..??
Dougie: Nothing,, becouse i’m not planning to let you go..
He looked at my lips with his gorgeous blue eyes and leaned in to kiss me.. I turned my head a bit like i just saw something and his kiss landed on my cheek.. He quickly pulled back.. I looked back in his direction with a smile on my face.. He looked a bit confused..
Joyce: Is there something..??
Dougie: No,, not really..
He let go off me and turned around.. I quickly went after him and wrapped my legs around his waist..
Joyce: Why are you going..??
Dougie: I thought you wanted me to leave you alone..??
I gave him a kiss in his neck..
Joyce: And i thought that you wouldn’t let me go..??
I let him go and he turned around.. He suddenly grabbed me tight and placed a kiss on my mouth..
Joyce: Aaaah,, idiot.. Your sqeezing me too tight.. I can’t breath properly..
Dougie: Sorry..
He loosened his grip..
Joyce: Thank you..
I gave him a kiss on his cheek..
Dougie: Want something to drink..??
Joyce: Could have been my idea..
We walked to our stuff for some money.. We said hi to Danny and Sarah and made our way to the bar.. We sat down at the bar and talked a bit as we had our drinks.. Sarah came not much later with Danny following her..
Sarah: Hey Joyce,, shall we check out the shops on board..??
Joyce: Sure..
I looked over to Dougie..
Dougie: What are you looking at me for..?? Your on a vacation with her..
I laughed..
Dougie: I’ll see you tonight,, ok..??
Joyce: You know where my room is..
I stood up and tried to walk away,, but he grabbed my wrist..
Dougie: Aren’t you forgetting something..??
I pretended like i didn’t knew what he was talking about..
Joyce: Hmm,, not that i know off..
Dougie: Are you sure..??
Joyce: What am i forgetting according to you..??
Dougie: Maybe this..??
He pulled me towards him and kissed me.. I pulled away..
Joyce: Ok.. Can i go shopping now..??
Dougie: Yeah..
Joyce: Ok,, i’m ready to go..
Sarah: Good..
We linked our arms in eachother and went to our room to put our towels and stuff away and get ready to shop.. We walked to the shops in nothing but our bikinis.. People were staring at us while we shopped for new perfumes..
Sarah: Oh I love this one..
She showed me a CK1 perfume.. I just smiled and grabbed another one..
Joyce: This one is so much better, it’s DKNY Red delicious..
Sarah: Yeah it’s lovely,, but my all time fave is this one..
She put down the perfume in the shopping cart,, if you could call them that.. They looked like small plastic baskets on wheels with a long handle.. We bought a few perfumes and then we walked over to the clothes stores.. There was so many different things to choose from.. We would have bought all of it,, but we had to save some of our money to when we got to Miami.. I tried all kinda things on and ended up buying a short,, black dress with a big,, white,, sewed on skull on it half on the side and half on the back.. I looked for something under it and found black,, footless tights..
Sarah: How do you do that..??
Joyce: Do what..??
Sarah: Buy just 2 things,, while there is so many nice stuff around here..
I laughed.. She had 3 pairs of jeans and seven tee's,, 3 black with different writing on them,, a blue one and a white one and a green one with some kind of writing on it in her hands..
Joyce: Well.. That’s very easy.. I just take like half off my money with me to make sure that i have something left..
Sarah: Hmmm.. Maybe i should do that too next time..
Joyce: Well,, that’s up to you..
We payed for our clothes and walked back to our rooms.. I looked at the clock..
Joyce: Howly shit..!! Have we shopped for that long..?? I should get dressed for dinner..
I got in my new clothes and blowdryed my hair and straightened my orange,, black fringe.. The rest off my hair was just black.. I had done it before we went on this cruise.. I didn’t feel like wearing much make-up,, so i only used some mascara and a little bit off eyeliner.. Somebody knocked at the door..
Joyce: Just a second..!!
I got in my black toeslippers and walked to the door.. The guys were standing at the door.. Dougie kissed me before i could even say hi.. It was a plesant surprise to be honest..
Dougie: Shall we go to dinner now..??
Joyce: Sure.. Let me just grab my stuff..
I closed the door behind me and we went to Sarah’s room..

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Sat May 31, 2008 12:33 pm

dougie's cheesy xD

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Post by xcutexangelx on Sat May 31, 2008 12:34 pm

Lol,, there had to be a difference between the boys.. Wink

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