"The story of Katie lee"

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"The story of Katie lee"

Post by Randomstezzy on Sun Feb 17, 2008 2:19 am

Title: Mistake
Author: Steph/stezzy
Chapters: 1 and 2 is being written
Rating: All ages
Dedications: Myself and the people reading this
Summary: It's a story about a girl , who is barricated in a playground , and has just seen her friends go into different time-dimensions and has no idea how to resolve it.








In the space of a few days , I became barricated in a playground which matched the size of a football pitch and had monkeybars and had greengrass everywhere abit like a farm , it was as loud as an earthquake and thunderstorm some days ago. This was all suprising on such a day called today . I had nobody to watch me play hide and seek, nobody to talk to me instantly. Nobody to even play with me being the attention seeker i was .this was apperantely all new to me.

I became the cause of this , remembering my friends being zoomed into a enormous tunnel of bright colours and another some storerys higher with complete darkness. Katie M being pushed and flatened into the dimension some inches away me. So was Freddy and Hayley.... I knew i should have went in with them but it was to late.

I knew i should have called a teacher, but... they were already in their either being beaten or having the time of their life who knows. All i remember was being terrifed to the core, but now i actually had to face that i was on my own . I was the only one in this playground . I was deserted , isolated in another dimension called earth. I had to do something about it, but.. how could i with only two hands and two feet it wasn't enough. I wasn't worried I was just scared that I didn't know where my closest friends might be.










So what will happen next ? , Will her friends be back or will she keep trying ?


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Post by Critical Acclaim on Sun Feb 17, 2008 9:24 am

I like this one,, continue with it,, just watch your punctuation and spelling.

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Post by Randomstezzy on Sun Feb 17, 2008 11:45 am

Thanks Johelle.
Thanks for the corrections..
Yeah , i now am poor at puncuation and spelling.
Very Happy - I gotta work on it .


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Post by Critical Acclaim on Sun Feb 17, 2008 11:47 am

uh huh and edit your sig.

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Post by Randomstezzy on Sun Feb 17, 2008 11:53 am

Done!
Umm .. ,
p.s My friend has registered .
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Post by Critical Acclaim on Sun Feb 17, 2008 11:56 am

is she the one with that cool and crazy screen name.

Toshi_shiori_sommet sommet...?

lol

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Post by Randomstezzy on Sun Feb 17, 2008 11:59 am

Yeah :]
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Post by Critical Acclaim on Sun Feb 17, 2008 12:03 pm

lol coolios

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Post by Randomstezzy on Sun Feb 17, 2008 12:06 pm

I think she's a HUGE manga FAN and she writes good chinese fiction.

-So what you up 2 ?
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Post by Critical Acclaim on Sun Feb 17, 2008 12:09 pm

use the chatbox steph.

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Post by Randomstezzy on Sun Feb 17, 2008 12:12 pm

Okay :]
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