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Hiding fears.

Post by Randomstezzy on Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:00 pm

Title: Hiding fears.
Author: Steph/Randomstez
Stanzas: One .
Dedications: Anyone who wishes to read.
A/N: It's a poem experienced ..



I stump my feet, covered in tears of echoed screams, touch my fingers like their ripping off,

As my heart mutters in despair, I tumble. Sit on the ground.

Afraid of my own shadow, afraid of my faded reflection.

I hide behind the walls, blocking myself.

I lie; sit down listening to what could be joy.

Joy.

Is the thing Iíve looked for, the happiness Iíve longed for.

Has entered the vision, Iím afraid of.



( Opps! - I've got to edit this , to make it more understandable]


Last edited by Random_Stez on Fri Sep 19, 2008 1:55 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Post by Critical Acclaim on Fri Sep 19, 2008 1:05 pm

Sounds good but i'm confused.

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Post by xcutexangelx on Fri Sep 19, 2008 1:13 pm

I don't really follow this..

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