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Post by Critical Acclaim on Sun Jan 13, 2008 7:49 am

Title: Closer
Author: Jat [me]
Chapters: 16 Finished
Rating: Uhhmm 13+
Disclaimer: I own the title,, David and storyline
Dedications: Councillor who told me to write how I feel about things down... this was the outcome. Haha.
Pairings [For Slash]: Pudd
Summary:
Harry's dad, David, is a shit head who should stay in Jail...!











Closer part 1

--Harry's POV--

Why would she do this to me, just the other day i told her i loved her.She kissed me on the cheek,thats when i knew there was something wrong.I could feel it. I asked her what was wrong and she replied with "I'm sorry Harry, your just too clingy" When she said that I was hurt but not that much hurt, I was upset but not enough to cry or get angry. So now i am here lying in my room, why the boy's had gone for a night out.I told them i was ill and did not want to go out.i lyed down thinking about nothing just blankness.
The door opened downstairs and i could hear the boys laughing, they were loud and rousy i could tell they had been drinking.I could hear footsteps coming up the stairs it was Dougie, I pretended to be asleep. He wasn't having any of it.

"Harry" he said

--silence--

"she dumped you didn't she" he asked

--urm huh--

Unexpectedly he got off the end of my bed and climbed in the bed with me. We were now face to face with his warm breath rebounding off my it.His hand was warm and soothing it seemed to warm my cold body.

"She wasn't worth it mate."He told me

--I know--

It was then when i realised love was closer than i thought.He smiled and got up out of the bed.
"Come downstairs" He said standing at the door. I got up and went downstairs to join the others in the kitchen.

"Hey feeling any better?" Danny asked me

--yeah got a thumping headache though--I lied

"take some asprin"Tom told me. I done what he said as he would be on my case.

--Did you guys have a good time-- I asked them

"yeah but it was not that fun without you,it's a shame that you weren't feeling well" Danny replied

--haha yeah-- I forced a nervous laugh --im going back to bed with this headache and all.-- I said as i went back upstairs.




--DOUGIES POV--

About Ten minutes after Harry went upstairs I heard a load but faint moan, I ran upstairs to find Harry in the bathroom being sick. He had vomit all over his t-shirt and jeans, and could hardly stand up. I took off his shirt and jeans leaving him in shorts(he always wears shorts over his boxers). I wiped his mouth as he had now finished throwing up.

He lyed on the floor shaking and then i noticed an empty vile of tablets fall out of his hands, he tried to commit suicide.

--Tom, Danny come quick i need help. It's Harry-- i shouted. By now Harry wasn't moving i started to cry, i couldn't help it.

"What happened?" Tom asked running into the bathroom. I couldn't talk but i showed him the vile and he got the message.

"Danny call an ambulance now!" He shouted i don't know why. Danny went to call an ambulance why Tom pulled me off the floor and took me into my room. The ambulance come in less than five minutes.Next thing i knew i was in the car staring out the window not saying a word, we arrived at the hospital. They took Harry into a private room as they knew he was in a band.

I saw them entering wires and tubes into him, he wasn't coming to. We were waiting nervously in the waiting room when a doctor walked in.

" Mr.Judd will be awake soon, his breathing has started up again and is coping stabily." the doctor explained. Tom and Danny let out a sigh of releif but i was wondering why he done it in the first place, was it because he realised he was not straight, what if this is all my fault.

" Doug you ok?" Tom asked me obviously noticing i did not respond to what the doctor had said.

-- Can I go and see him -- I asked her hoping she would say yes.

" Yes if you like but he is not awake and only one at a time ok." she said pointing to his room.

I went in first as the others stayed where they were. I saw him laying there on his bed looking emotionless and pale. There was a chair i sat down and held onto his hand crying.

-- Why did you do this to me Harry. Was it because of me. Or was it because of your sexuality. I don't know what to think anymore, how could you try and commit suicide knowing full well that i loved you. -- I squeezed his hand not letting go still crying but now harder. I felt a little squeeze back on my hand.I looked up to see Harry staring at me faintly with tears in his eyes.

" I didn't want to leave because of you, i just don't think i can cope with all the p,press and pressure. I'm just s,scared" He stuttered still holding my hand.

-- I think it's time we tell them, theyr'e just gonna find out anyway.-- I explained now i had stopped crying.

" I think so too" he said.I called the other two in and told the doctor that he had awoke.

" Hey, doug and i have sommet to tell you. Sit down it's important." They sat down looking a bit worried.

"what is it?" Danny asked looking even more worried than Tom.

-- Well you know i am gay, and my new partner is well...um Harry.--

" Are you joking. Tell me your joking" Tom said looking shocked and dissapointed at the same time. Danny was speechless.

" We are not lying, why do you think we have to lie about this." Harry said ending in a whisper.

" I don't beleive you, how do we know it's not just another one of your pranks." Danny questioned.

-- Because we love eachother i'll show you.-- I knew what was coming next.

" W,what how." Harry looked a little nervous i signalled to him it was ok woth a look. I leant over him and kissed him i was surprised when he returned it just as much. We parted and smiled at each other, Danny and Tom was just staring in shock.

" oh my god it's true." Tom said.









This is an old-ish one... There is a sequel but I have no idea what to write and i'm stuck on the third or fourth part...

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Post by it's attitude, baby on Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:02 am

Aww, poor Harry for getting dumped in the beginning. But he'll probably be better off together with Dougie.
I can't believe Danny and Tom didn't believe Doug & Harry when they told them. At least there was a bit of pudd kissing Cool

Can't wait for more :] it's great ^^,
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Post by xcutexangelx on Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:18 am

I think i've read this 1 already.. Cool

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:19 am

I know you've read this one already.
But I wanted to post it so I can think of what to write for the sequel.

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Post by xcutexangelx on Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:22 am

Ok then..

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:15 am

Basketball Who wants more

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Post by it's attitude, baby on Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:18 am

eek, eek, i do, i do =D
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Me.. tongue

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:28 am

PART TWO
Harry's POV


We went home the boys still couldn't get it into their heads that we were together. I also couldn't beleive what Dougie done in the hospital but i don't regret it. Me and Dougie stayed together for the next hour talking about how the fans and press were going to handle it, we decided to tell them later when we got to handle it first. It was late so me and Doug ended up falling asleep in his room. I was the first to wake up as Doug shouted in my face in his sleep. It was funny because he shouted something like 'cheese'. I left him a bit as he had a hard day yesterday. When i got up out of the bed i had a real thumping headache so i took some dispring, as i took all the asprin the day before. I sat on the sofa staring at a silent tele as sound was too much pain right now. After about ten minutes of waching home-decor in subtitles I was joined by Tom.

" Hey good sleep?" he asked

-- Yes until i was woken by Dougie shouting the word cheese into my face--Tom cracked up laughing --It's not funny Tom why is he dreaming about cheese anyway?Anyway i left him to sleep as yesterday was hectic.-- I explained.

" I know it was just the look on your face when you said cheese. Why you watching tele with subtitles?" he asked

-- I have a thumping headache don't know why though.-- I told him hoping he would just leave it at that.
" Maybe it is because you took about forty tablets yesterday, threw up and fainted all in less than ten minutes." which was true.

-- Yeah i know i'm sorry i shuldn't of done it. I was stupid to and i am not proud of it ok. i was just so scared.-- Just then as Tom was about to say something Danny come running downstairs.

" Why is doug in his room shouting? and what at?" he asked with a worried look on his face

-- we don't know lets find out.-- with that i went upstairs followed by Tom and Danny. I went into Dougs room to find him lying in bed awake and shaken up, it looked like he was about to cry. He looked at me and the other two before breaking down in tears.I sat on the bed next to him and pulled him into a cuddle.

-- What's wrong doug? why you crying?-- I asked him. he cryed into my chest for about thirty seconds before replying.

" It's him Harry, my dad he's back i know it.I can feel it in me. he's back to get me Harry." he bawled into me.

-- Doug shhh, it's ok we all know that David is in jail he isn't due out for at least another ten years. Plus he is in Germany we are in London. He can't get you, he won't get you.-- i tryed to comfort him by kissing him on his head.

" No you don't understand i haven't had a dream about him in years and all of a sudden he is back in my dreams just as worst as real life. He is back i know it. He will do it again Harry." he mumbled still crying. But he was crying for a reason what went in that day and the next was a real life nightmere



hehe Smaller parts now.
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Post by xcutexangelx on Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:39 am

Awesomeness..!!

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Post by it's attitude, baby on Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:41 am

aww, noo, poor dougie =/
harry's so sweet for being there with him <3
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Post by Critical Acclaim on Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:52 am

Harry loves Dougie...

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Post by xcutexangelx on Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:56 am

Manic! wrote:Harry loves Dougie...

Really..?? Very Happy

**sarcasm,, sarcasm**






LOL,, i already figured that out in part 1.. clown

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Thu Jan 17, 2008 8:56 am

I'm known for stating the obvious,

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Manic! wrote:I'm known for stating the obvious,

Sometimes i have the same..

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PArt 3

Post by Critical Acclaim on Sat Jan 19, 2008 6:27 am

PART THREE
Harry's POV


the day went quick as dougie was at the phyciatrist half of the day, we do not know what he told him but he come out really happy. It was the day of the tour and about midday and dougie was still asleep. I went up to wake him and found him sitting on the bed with his knees up to his chest.

--what's wrong doug?-- i ask him sitting next to him.

"I'm just thinking thats all.You know about us and the media,us and family, us and evrything."He said looking at me with tears in his eyes.

--What brang this on? I told you it doesn't matter what the press thinks.We can tell them tomoro if you want." with that he looked down.i lifted his head so he was looking at me.

"i don't know i just don't like keeping secrets you know that, and we don't have to tell them tomoro if you want." he said forcing his head downwards of my hand.

--look doug i promise we'll tell them tomoro at the end of our performance.I know that you don't like keeping secrets.-- i said kissing him softly on the cheek. he smiled and went into the bathroom.I left and went downstairs.

"what's wrong?" Tom asked me

--nothing is wrong he is just rethinking about telling the media about us.--i said he nodded.

Dougie came downstairs 15 minutes after. he got something to eat and did not say much. Fletch came about 1:00 to take us to our tour bus. it took us about half an hour to get to wembley arena.We were rehearsing when all of a sudden dougie screamed and fell on the floor holding his head. we all ran over to him. all he kept saying was it is his head.There was a paramedic to see what was wrong, he said it was nothing just a sudden headache probably from the static of our instruments.We took him to the changing rooms where he sat with a ice pack on his head.

-- you feel better now?-- i asked him.

"yeah do not know what happened just come so quickly. Don't worry i'm fine not hurt."he said smiling at me. his headache went quickly, we decided to finish rehearsing encase it happened again. we went through our schedule for tomoro.

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Post by Music* on Sat Jan 19, 2008 7:08 am

I allready love this!
Put more up soon, please! Razz

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Post by xcutexangelx on Sat Jan 19, 2008 12:09 pm

Jatle..
More soon please..

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Post by Critical Acclaim on Sat Jan 19, 2008 12:18 pm

PART FOUR
Dougie's POV

It was time for our first gig of the tour, we were setting up the instruments on stage as the audience came in.We started the concert and it went well, the croud were singing along. It was the end of the concert and we chose some girls from the croud to come and get a signed t-shirt from one of us and sing the last song(that girl). now over half of the croud were gone but the was this one man who sat there with his hood on. there was a group of girls that ran past him and one knocked off his hood.I don't know how he got there but he was.It was David my dad. with that i ran off to the changing rooms. Harry must of seen because he came in after me.

"what's wrong doug." he asked me, by now i was freaked out and crying.

-- Harry i told you he is back, David's in the croud. I am not lying he is there i saw him with my own eyes. I thought he was in jail, you said he was in jail harry, but he's not he's out there. back to GET MEEEE!!!-- i shouted the last bit crying, i didn't wanna shout but my emotions over come me.


PART FIVE
Dougie's POV


How could this happen i thought he was in prison, then just when i am getting over it he comes back, but this time real. I don't think i can't cope with this it's just not fair, why me?

"it's alright doug i won't let him get to you, he will not hurt you he can see you yeah but not get to you." Harry said to me. i must of said all that stuff out loud.

--Yeah but harry you say all this stuff and it won't help all the time, he could come after you i don't want you to get hurt like i did. All i did was join the band and he beat me, what he did harry sent me to hospital i was only 16. He come back to get me worse probably kill me and i did nothing. i can't take it no more i am going out there to see what he wants. I don't care anymore i just want it over and done with.-- i said getting up to leave. Harry stopped me.

--Harry let me go out there i want to see him one last time before i kill him-- I shouted now i don't know why, but when i said this harry looked upset and let me go.

When i got out there he was gone but his hat was still on the chair. In the hat was a peice of note that said 'Leaving your closest friend is a big mistake' I ran back to my changing rooms to find harry gone. There was another hat on the chair with another note that read 'if you want your band mate back meet me with a bag of money containg £25,000 at lancaster berry library at 2:00 tommorow'.
with that i ran straight to tom and danny who were in their changing rooms.

I told them how i saw my dad and went to sort things out, and the notes i found. They rang fletch straight away who sent out a search party and gathered the amount of money.


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Post by xcutexangelx on Sat Jan 19, 2008 12:21 pm

OMG..!!

Noooo..

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Re: Closer... chp4 and 5. page2

Post by Critical Acclaim on Sat Jan 19, 2008 12:25 pm

uuhhhhh edited.
Posted wrong bit,

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Post by xcutexangelx on Sat Jan 19, 2008 12:32 pm

LOL,, ok..
I read it again..

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Post by it's attitude, baby on Sun Jan 20, 2008 4:01 am

David is such an arse... *pokes him with a stick*

i hope Harrys okay =/
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Post by Critical Acclaim on Tue Jan 22, 2008 12:55 pm

*takes stick and sharpens it*
*gives it back*

Now poke him,,, but harder

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Post by xcutexangelx on Tue Jun 10, 2008 1:36 am

Post more puh-lease..

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